Tuesday, August 3, 2021

My holiday writing.

Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialog and to describe what we saw and how we felt. 

I enjoyed writing the story about what I did in the holidays.

I found it challenging to write it all in time and publish it. 

My digital learning object shows what I did in the holidays.

Next time I would change the story and write something else.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Jaime
    My name is Anna and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked the part were you got woken up by your cat.
    I learned about your holiday.
    Maybe you could highlight it.
    Please visit my blog annac@saintmarysgis.school.nz
    Mā te wā
    from Anna


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